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DISTANCE BETWEEN US
By JAP

Should I say this to you?
Or not?

You are always in my mind
But I don't know about you
Anything, even we always see each other
Should I say this?
Or not...?

I don't have any courage to be closer
It's so far, so long
The distance between us
Even if we always together
Do you know that I always confused?
Because of you
Because of this distance

My, what a feeling
Is this love, or hatred?
I hate to had this feeling
But I feel so happy too

Will I reach you sometime?
With this small hands
You don't know
That this feeling is not a big diamond
I just a small stone
But it is so important

Will this distance reduced?
If yes, when?
If no, why?
So...
Maybe, I never know...
©2006-2009 ~jap0911
:iconjap0911:

Author's Comments

I wrote this poem when I listen to classic instrumental compilation. It's sad, but romantic and touching.

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:icontruely-me-niece:
i love this piece
i get what ur trying to say
its just that the grammar is bad
but its a lovely piece

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love = confusion
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true love will find a way
it always does-

i think
:iconjap0911:
Yeah, grammar is my weakness. xD

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Eternal dream is scattered memory
Scattered memory is eternal dream
Would you believe me?
:iconvincentfaust9:
I agree with you,classic music is ideal for writing this kind of poems ^^ Especially Chopin and Beethoven :)

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Holy water is just a plain water... There's nothing special about it.
- Shizuma Hanazono

The terrorism these days is not for the ones who are dying, but for the ones who are watching.
- Krzysztof Liedel
:iconjap0911:
I was really embarrassed when I re-read this poem.
This is unlike me at all... xD

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.......You.....
:iconvincentfaust9:
Awww,but i really think it looks cool...

--
Holy water is just a plain water... There's nothing special about it.
- Shizuma Hanazono

The terrorism these days is not for the ones who are dying, but for the ones who are watching.
- Krzysztof Liedel

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